-Photo #2:
This is my favorite photo of your five text photos. I think your aperture is set well, having the girl and table in a good depth of field but slightly blurring everything behind the window. I think you did a good job of capturing real emotions, it really represents a student eating and studying, and I like how you can tell she isn't posing. I like how you made it so I could read the Lays on the bag of chips, however I would have liked to been able to read the title of her book as well. You have really good balance and composure through out the whole photo. For some reason I feel like the photo is slightly tilted, I may be wrong, but even if it is it doesn't bother me. Some of your background is a little over exposed but that is to be expected with this type of shot. Over all it's a good photo.
-Photo #3:
I like how you chose to put this photo in black and white, it really brings out the text in the photo and keeps it from feeling hectic and cluttered. I feel like this person could be posing but he still confers good emotion. I like how it is tilted and from a lower view point. I also like how you can read the majority of the display shirts, you chose a good aperture for this shot. The only thing I wish you could have done differently in this photo, and it may not have been possible, was to have made the photos in the top right corner to have been in better focus. Good photo.
-Photo #5:
I didn't understand the joke at first but once I was informed of some of the background I understood it. I like the composition and balance, I don't think it would have worked without the word and bubble placed in but with them the balance works. Again, I feel like you captured good emotion. You have done a good job of capturing people in all of your photos, real creeper status... I'm just playing. I like how your able to capture people so well. The only thing I would have changed is the color of the writing, I don't like how it matches the worker. Good job.
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